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-                A rich development environment for Haskell
-                programming.
-        <br />
-        <a href="contents.html">Learn more</a> about the features the
-        Haskell Platform provides.
+                The Haskell Platform is the easiest way to get started
+                with programming Haskell. It comes with all you need to get
+                up and running. Think of it
+                like Haskell: batteries included.
+        <a href="contents.html">Learn more...</a>
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-                Only stable and widely-used tools and libraries, drawn from
+                The Haskell Platform contains only stable and
+                widely-used tools and libraries, drawn from
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-                    packages</a>.
+                    packages</a>, ensuring you get the best from what 
+                is on offer.
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-                Advanced features such as multicore parallelism,
-                thread sparks and transactional memory, along with
+                The Haskell Platform ships with advanced features such
+                as multicore parallelism, thread sparks and
+                transactional memory, along with
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